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For Queen [livejournal.com profile] uhzoomzip: Motorcycles

  • Jul. 26th, 2007 at 11:10 AM
emiliglia: (jack-2)
Queen Susie requested Motorcycles for her day as Luau Queen at [livejournal.com profile] lostsquee.

I offer drabble and a two versions of a header (one's blank if anyone else wanted it or if you wanted to add your own text).

Jack
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The first thing Jack does when he leaves the airport is rent a motorcycle. Before he even has a hotel room in this foreign land whose tongue he does not know, Jack's handing over newly exchanged baht for a black Kawasaki Ninja.

He likes the sense of control when he's riding it, how small it seems and responsive it feels. He also likes knowing that one turn taken too sharp or a moment of distraction could end up killing him.

Jack keeps the ocean on his right, not sure where he's going to stop, but for once not particularly caring.

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[identity profile] ficklemuse.livejournal.com wrote:
Jul. 26th, 2007 03:53 pm (UTC)


GUH!

I think I just swallowed my tongue.

That's sooo pretty and I love the ficlet too!

Most excellent job!
[identity profile] emiliglia.livejournal.com wrote:
Jul. 28th, 2007 02:19 am (UTC)
Thanks so much, hun!

Matthew Fox is so hot... *drools*
[identity profile] gottalovev.livejournal.com wrote:
Jul. 26th, 2007 04:05 pm (UTC)
that is just excellent!!! I love Jack flirting with danger, keeping his options opened.

and that header? hell yeah. that pic always did something to me.
[identity profile] emiliglia.livejournal.com wrote:
Jul. 28th, 2007 02:20 am (UTC)
Hee, thank you!

that pic always did something to me.

I've decided I'm addicted to the way his back is curved there above the seat.... Yeah...
[identity profile] uhzoomzip.livejournal.com wrote:
Jul. 26th, 2007 04:25 pm (UTC)
He likes the sense of control when he's riding it, how small it seems and responsive it feels. He also likes knowing that one turn taken too sharp or a moment of distraction could end up killing him.

oh, this is so jack, control bordering on loss of control. love it!

and OMG, the HEADER! i absolutely adore it, sweetie - the 'come fuck me' sexiness he exudes shouldn't be legal (but i'm damn glad it is!)

exactly what i wanted - thanks so much!!! *smooches*
[identity profile] emiliglia.livejournal.com wrote:
Jul. 28th, 2007 02:21 am (UTC)
oh, this is so jack, control bordering on loss of control.

Yay! Totally what I was going for! :)

I've so glad you like it, babe. Was all for you!
[identity profile] bbmarcello.livejournal.com wrote:
Jul. 26th, 2007 04:40 pm (UTC)
Jack's The Motorcycle Boy! Just awesome and awesome header too!
[identity profile] emiliglia.livejournal.com wrote:
Jul. 28th, 2007 02:22 am (UTC)
Thanks so much!
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[identity profile] holycitygirl.livejournal.com wrote:
Jul. 26th, 2007 05:16 pm (UTC)
Oooh I adore both the header and the drabble. There is something about dangerous Jack, mmm. Good stuff!
[identity profile] emiliglia.livejournal.com wrote:
Jul. 28th, 2007 02:23 am (UTC)
Dangerous!Jack is HOT! They could've done so much more with the Thailand episode... I'm still hoping that what they showed was like when he arrived but then after getting the tat he had to hang out in the seedy places to avoid people and learned to play poker.
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[personal profile] siluria wrote:
Jul. 26th, 2007 06:27 pm (UTC)
Well both the fic and the piccie made me drool! :) I have that shot as my wallpaper :)
[identity profile] emiliglia.livejournal.com wrote:
Jul. 28th, 2007 02:24 am (UTC)
I don't think I'd get any work done with that as my wallpaper. ;) Of course I currently have Dean and Sam from SPN, and they're very distracting. I used a Boone background once and couldn't get ANYTHING done. His eyes are so mesmerizing.
[identity profile] gemjam.livejournal.com wrote:
Jul. 28th, 2007 08:21 am (UTC)
I love this. It's so Jack's mindset when he was in Thailand. No plans or organisation, just seeing where the wind takes him. And I love that darkness in there as well, how the control he feels is offset by the fact that it could be lost at any moment. Really nice.
[identity profile] emiliglia.livejournal.com wrote:
Jul. 28th, 2007 06:21 pm (UTC)
Thanks so much, hun!

I really hope "Stranger in a Strange Land" isn't all that we see of Jack's time in Thailand because I feel like there was still some dark spots we haven't yet heard about.
[identity profile] alliecat8.livejournal.com wrote:
Aug. 5th, 2007 02:58 am (UTC)
I'm using today to catch up with the luau. All of it. Ooh, I LOVE this glimpse of Jack's wild side. I could kiss Susie for requesting it, and I could smooch you for indulging her with such a great drabble about it. Thank you very muchly! *loves*

(wishes for a motorcycle icon)
[identity profile] emiliglia.livejournal.com wrote:
Aug. 5th, 2007 03:00 pm (UTC)
So glad you liked it, babe! I keep waiting to hear about Jack having a more wild time in Thailand after what we saw in that one episode - how could he learn to play poker while flying kites on the beach?