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3 Oz 100-word Drabbles

  • Mar. 7th, 2007 at 7:34 PM
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[livejournal.com profile] hardtime100 #101: Something Borrowed

Her kiss made you feel numb. Borrowed comfort, that's all it was, as the lights flickered and dimmed before returning to life in the gymnasium around you. A moment's worth of borrowed love tasted sour in your mouth. Cyril's love for you had been endless, selfless.

Later, in the ward, he asked to see Cyril. It was too late, you told him, and he cried, cried for another lost child, even though he had lost them long ago. But now is the first time you've actually felt lost, clinging to the one person who remained that reminded you of home.

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[livejournal.com profile] hardtime100 #105: Scars

Every night, after Toby had climbed back into his own bunk and fallen asleep, Chris would go over to the small mirror above the sink and twist his body around to look at the scars. There were two of them right next to each other, identical in shape and size. Toby had said that he'd done it, that he'd been the one who stabbed Keller in the back while he was shelving copy paper. Chris knew he deserved it. Just because he couldn't see the scars he'd inflicted on Toby didn't mean they weren't there.

Love was a scar, too.

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[livejournal.com profile] hardtime100 #106: If The Cliche Fits...
(In a gunfight, the hero can hide behind any object even if it is very thin and no bullets will pass through.)

Toby opened the door to his cell and there was a loud bang that made him spin around while dropping to the floor. The French guy was below the CO station, holding a gun, as Kenny was falling in slow motion, a red hole marking his chest. Toby watched the other inmates duck behind columns and overturned tables for cover as bullets sprayed wildly. He saw Chris get shot and crawled to him, hearing Keller's curses under the gunfire as he dragged him to safety. Toby thanked God when the SORT team entered, clinging to Chris as he awaited help.

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[identity profile] hkath.livejournal.com wrote:
Mar. 8th, 2007 01:47 am (UTC)
Awesome! I love the second one the most, I think :)
[identity profile] emiliglia.livejournal.com wrote:
Mar. 9th, 2007 12:04 am (UTC)
Thank you!

It's funny how such little things can say so much sometimes, isn't it?
[identity profile] inthekeyofd.livejournal.com wrote:
Mar. 8th, 2007 02:08 am (UTC)
I didn't even realize you wrote Oz..Oh Oz, my first online fandom, so many years now..How reading this brings back so many memories..SCARS, oh scars, that shot me right back to that Chris just looking at him wondering if he had been the one that did it..while he was stacking paper, God I remember that scene..EXCELLENT JOB ON THESE!!

[identity profile] emiliglia.livejournal.com wrote:
Mar. 9th, 2007 12:07 am (UTC)
Well...I only write Oz if you consider those writing. LOL. That one seems to be the popular one. That was such a good scene, though. Lee is such an amazing actor - why isn't he on TV right now?
[identity profile] foxxcub.livejournal.com wrote:
Mar. 8th, 2007 02:08 am (UTC)
Awww, I LOVE them! The second one especially--the last line is quite a punch.
[identity profile] emiliglia.livejournal.com wrote:
Mar. 9th, 2007 12:08 am (UTC)
Aw, thank you so much!

the last line is quite a punch.

It's true, though - more literally in Oz than most other cases, of course.