Sep. 4th, 2011 (UTC)

  • 10:43 PM (UTC)
I love the way you turned it about so there was sex at the beginning and the reader was crying out for ‘just’ a kiss at the end.

I was describing this story as "a relationship in reverse" when I sent it to my sister for editing. I'm surprised I didn't get a slew of "WHERE'S THE SEX!?" comments. XD

I've always felt like I'm not good at writing kissing and this version isn't actually the first draft version of it - I went and added more, because I was all, "The story's been building up to this. I can't leave it at that!" And I definitely had to include the button thing.

Thank you so much, bb! ♥


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